Hi everyone this is a new term and fun subject, learning new things. We have to do the story about the gentle giant and I did a magic star dust poster. RUA :)
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Wednesday, August 4, 2021
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Hi Rua. This is a great presentation and you have clearly put thought into the layout and presentation. I agree with Harper that it would look better if you removed the background from the image of the jar of stardust. It would also be helpful if you explained what the dream dust does to help influence people to buy it. Mrs B
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